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Old 10-02-2007, 06:32 PM
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This is my most 'commercial' looking shot. I did this with the SB-600 flash and the Tamron 17-50mm lens. I'm giving up computers, dunno...after those Reiki attunements I'm just letting go of my world.
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Old 10-03-2007, 01:45 AM
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The picture has quite a bit of motion blur in it, what shutter speed was this taken at?

The composition also looks a bit crowded.
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Old 10-03-2007, 02:23 AM
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I Agree w/ mat on the motion blur. Did you take this freehand w/ no tripod? It is very good to use a tripod when applicable to get the most out of your camera. Do you have a shutter speed for this composition?
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Sounds silly, but clone out the stickers on the laptop and it would be a nicer shot...also the focus is a problem.
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