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Someone else can mention adjusting your exposure to avoid the overexposed white shirt and cake. The fine choice of moment-to-shoot got a child's earnest effort to snuff the candles, and a wispy point of interest in smoke as well. That gets a Well-done! from me. Composition and knowing when to shoot are critical, the other stuff you can learn with reading and experimenting.
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Awww what a sweet photo! I love that you captured the smoke aftermath of the flame that once burned. I don't know much about post editing but wanted to say that I thought the picture was adorable. I know some folks here are pretty amazing at removing background items. LOL
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I love the picture.
The smoke adds a very nice effect. I don't find the background very distracting at all. My eye was drawn to her face and the smoke from the candle. The blown out white bits are something you notice when you look for it...looking for something to critique. But it doesn't take away from the photo. Great catch.
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I think you captured the most important aspect of the picture...the moment. As for the background and the blasted cake and shirt, those are little details that arent important to the story as far as im concerned. Job Well Done!
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I think that it's an excellent moment. Your timing was really spot on. I agree that for the most part it looks good, and the blown out shirt and cake aren't particularly troublesome.
For the future, however, I'll offer a few suggestions. I managed to have a look at the exif for your shot and noticed some of your settings: Quote:
In any case, consider a flash, consider lowering your ISO, and consider increasing your shutter speed (or possibly your aperture so you get the right exposure).I still think it's a cute shot though.
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Wow thanks for all of the CC!!
JimneyClicket - Thanks! A photog friend of mine had told me that I had the eye for photography I just had to get the details worked out. I am not good at deciding what sittings to use. I am sure that will come with time and experience! ![]() Texotic - She even picked those out herself! She had a Mickey Mouse Clubhouse themed birthday party. Nicole - Thanks for the suggestions! I am always open to a better way to do things since I am very new and still learning! I appreciate everyone's comments!!!
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