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Very nice. I especially like how there is a ring of highlights around the flower petals.
As for critique, those green stem things on the left are "crossing over" ontop of the flower and it's a bit iffy to me. If you reshoot this flower you could move it aside. A more shallow depth of field to give a more blurry background could have helped the overall image. And lastly, I would recommend a square crop on the flower if all the things I mentioned previously were addressed.
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The color on this flower is magnificent. My only suggestions would be to crop it in a bit closer, raise your dof and maybe try removing or reshooting with out the stem in front of the flower petal.
Thanks for sharing, I love this one!
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perhaps too saturated, but i still like it. i would suggest cloning out that green blade that is overlapping the flower. good framing and focus.
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