Critique My Shot (OVER THERE )

[snapdragon]

( OVER THERE )

[RexK_Cozumel]

The image would be stronger is the sky was not so bland and the image was framed so that the person is in the right side of the frame so that s/he is pointing into the frame instead of out of it. I also find that the bits of leaves on the left side of the frame are distracting since there is no reference just a bit of leaves floating in the corner of the frame. It would have beeen better to either see more of the tree or none of it.

[snapdragon]

Originally Posted by RexK_Cozumel

The image would be stronger is the sky was not so bland and the image was framed so that the person is in the right side of the frame so that s/he is pointing into the frame instead of out of it. I also find that the bits of leaves on the left side of the frame are distracting since there is no reference just a bit of leaves floating in the corner of the frame. It would have beeen better to either see more of the tree or none of it.

Thanks Rexk I can clone out the bits of the tree , i can see what you mean by that . the sky is as it was , but maybe I can tweek the color or contrast , would that help ? her pointing out of the frame , i liked that part as she was back on , it was a candid , I will learn , thanks so much . i will edit it with your points in mind .