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09-19-2007, 01:09 PM
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The Yelllow Core
Comments please
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Akshat Rathi Senior, Institute of Chemical Technology, University of Mumbai, India. Camera: Canon S3 IS Flickr:http://www.flickr.com/photos/akshatrathi/ Blogs on:http://rathi.akshat.googlepages.com/ 
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09-19-2007, 01:22 PM
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I like how the slight swirling motion of the petal lines draws you into the center. It could be a little sharper, though. Has a slight oof look.
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09-19-2007, 02:16 PM
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Nice!! Love the spiral lines and the colour. Composition is also good. It looks a little dark, though.
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Canon 350D, 18-55mm 3.5-5.6, 50mm 1.8, 100mm 2.8 Macro, 75-300mm 4-5.6, Sigma 10-20mm 4-5.6 flickr|Photoblog A picture is a frozen slice of time painted on paper. OK to edit and repost my shots on DPS
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09-19-2007, 02:48 PM
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Is that flower still to hand? It is a great subject but, as noted, the sharpness and exposure don't quite seem to do it justice. Don't take one shot - take ten or twenty, with minor variations and see if you can get one that betters this.
Nothing seems perfectly sharp so you may need to make adjustments to allow a faster shutter speed or put your camera on a tripod or other support (I don't know what control your camera allows). Wulf
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09-19-2007, 09:40 PM
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The composition is good, but this image lacks sharpness. Also the brown background peeking around the flower hardly does justice to the flower itself.
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09-21-2007, 07:27 AM
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Thank you for the comments. Unfortunately, at this time of the year I am unable to get hold of the flower and cannot have a re-shoot. But whenever I get the chance I'll jump on it.
Did a little processing... Better is it a little? 
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09-23-2007, 06:43 AM
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White is the theme..I don't know why suddenly all white pictures are surfacing up in my albums.
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Akshat Rathi Senior, Institute of Chemical Technology, University of Mumbai, India. Camera: Canon S3 IS Flickr:http://www.flickr.com/photos/akshatrathi/ Blogs on:http://rathi.akshat.googlepages.com/
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