Macro

[akshatrathi294]

Taken a long while back...but would love to have a critique...
also..How can I remove the date? It looks horrible...!

[Saralonde]

Beautiful flower, beautiful color. I wish the yellow flower was a bit sharper so it would stand out a bit more.

[KagoGrl]

It's a nice shot! The date can be removed with the help of Photoshop or something similar. The flower itself could be a little sharper. Perhaps a slightly tighter crop might make the flower stand out even more.

[matthewchj]

Not bad, but it would be improved with a tighter shot and more sharpening.

I think the date is automatically superimposed on your pictures when you transfer them directly from camera to computer, instead of using a card reader. I could be wrong, though.

[clockdoc]

Hi. As KagoGrl suggested, the date can be removed via software but probably the best bet here is to remove it by closer cropping.

[akshatrathi294]

A crop and some sharpening...looks better?

[D40]

that looks alot better
great picture ! =]

[aadam_21]

This composition looks much better. It looks, however, to have been a little oversharpened. Still a beautiful flower though.

[akshatrathi294]

Thank you guys...

Do you think the black part in the background is a little distracting??

[clockdoc]

I think you are on the right track. Thanks for taking the time to recrop and post the changes.