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I like the "S" curve in the background and its placement. The placement of flower looks just fine for me, I agree with Subrata, about the focus.
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you know i love this image baby, you never told me if this one came out on film...
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It did... I turned it in (along with 8 other pics), and got a 90 on the assignment. ![]() I like the digital version better, though.
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Excellent work! You have a good eye for composition by incorporating the "S" curve in the background.
Since I read from left to right, I tend to view images the same way. In your original, I initially see the flower, partly because of its position on the left side of the frame and also because of its color. But then the curve catches my eye and leads me all too quickly out the right side of the image. Just for fun, flip the image left to right and see how it looks to your eye. See if it makes any difference in how it keeps you within the frame a bit longer.
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