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A month ago i was in a little gth.
There were a birthday of AN-2 plane . He is 60 years old and it is still used
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Old 01-21-2008, 05:09 PM
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The second version is more eye-catching because the colours are more saturated (note - postings in the critique section should only have one image attached; in future, you should pick one or the other to start with) but still appears rather cluttered.

A different angle, to avoid foreground clutter, and narrow DoF, to avoid background confusion, would probably have worked well.

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I like the second photo the best with the sharper colors. I have to agree though, it is a little crowded.
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Love the colors in the second shot. The focus being just on the one plane would have made it a better shot. It is very busy and one doesnt really know what they are supposed to be looking at first.
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I like the idea but I find my eye being drawn to the wing of the front plane that seems to be in the way. It's hard because you can't control how the planes were spaced, but perhaps that angle wasn't the best.
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