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Old 09-06-2007, 12:45 PM
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I got this church in my home town, it's a little edited with photohsop.
I could insert original later.

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Old 09-06-2007, 12:56 PM
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Welcome to this forum mew,
Its a bright centrally aligned subject which fills the frame too tightly. The branches from the to right can be removed to clear distraction. Since it is very close and the setting has gone to wide mode, you have slanting walla and pillars. Do you have any other photograph taken from slightly different angle, from a little far so that there is more room around the church? Did you put a gradient in the sky? If you send us the EXIF data (camera settins), I am sure we can offer a few more tips.
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Old 09-06-2007, 12:59 PM
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Sometimes when capturing such a grand and huge building, focusing in on one particular section makes just as bold of a photo. Perhaps one of the windows or one of the towers............
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Old 09-06-2007, 01:34 PM
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wel original was

I took only this photo when i was there. I'll send EXIF data later, when get back from work
Well gona go there soon So i'll take some more pictures
If'll have some more time, maybe i'll go to a little church near my home town, it's a fantastic sample of Rococo style (interior)
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Hmmmmm sky can be hard to control tho, but if your proficient in photoshop, you could try selecting the sky and improving the colour a tad.

I did feel that the church was too closed in, which i guess it what someone else pointed out.
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Old 09-07-2007, 07:39 AM
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Hmmmmm sky can be hard to control tho, but if your proficient in photoshop, you could try selecting the sky and improving the colour a tad.

I did feel that the church was too closed in, which i guess it what someone else pointed out.
well i had to choose to get church, or to get a tree only
I'll try to do more shots when i will be there
This time i'l get something like F2.8 or F1.4 because it's kind a hard in the evening with F4
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