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Old 09-04-2007, 11:13 AM
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I snapped this photo a short while ago and wanted to get some comments on it please, thanks.



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Old 09-04-2007, 11:23 AM
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wrath1, Welcome

Good composition, always fun to shoot. Could be more attractive with a simpler, more universal subject. Lots of green and white, canopy (red/pink) sort of distracts the attention.
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would you suggest cropping ?
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Old 09-04-2007, 11:50 AM
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wrath1,

If the subject refracted was really clear and stood out simply and stronger, I would crop some, top/bottom and right. With the house showing in the background here, I think it helps to leave it to explain the image in the drop.
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Old 09-05-2007, 12:37 AM
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