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Old 09-03-2007, 09:07 AM
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Old 09-03-2007, 09:45 AM
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I think it would be better if the lady was a little more into the frame. Cutting her off with part of her nose and mouth showing is not very flattering and also, if she was a bit further towards the centre of the image, I think it would compensate for the person in the foreground being cut off at the edge of the frame.

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Personally, I love the way that they are cut off, I think that it gives balance to the two people in the shadow. Maybe I wish that there wasn't a light bit of tree in the background directly in front of infocus guys face?.. maybe.. otherwise I like it.
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Old 09-03-2007, 11:02 AM
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The expression captured is nice. Yet I feel if her complete face was shown it would have made a difference. The man she is talking to is better the way it is now...cut off slightly.
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Old 09-03-2007, 06:29 PM
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Yes - I don't have a problem with cutting off the guy in the foreground... I would just like to see a touch more of the lady.

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Old 09-04-2007, 06:07 AM
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brianfarrell,

There are subjects that can be framed this way. Given the title, I don't believe this is one of them. The premise is based on her eye and crossed arms. The walkway columns and other two guys don't add to that. It's 25% a very good shot, lower left quadrant.
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Old 09-04-2007, 06:27 AM
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It's 25% a very good shot, lower left quadrant.
Your opinion and thanks for expressing it. Others have differed.
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