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Old 09-01-2007, 01:56 PM
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After finding out that I can actually use this picture, I'm ready to let you people critique it.



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Old 09-01-2007, 02:28 PM
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I like the lighting but I do think the bottom is cropped off a bit too tight and the N is almost out of site. Clusty accross the front is very distracting.
I lke the black background, it brings out the colors in the ball
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Old 09-01-2007, 02:39 PM
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I like the lighting but I do think the bottom is cropped off a bit too tight and the N is almost out of site. Clusty accross the front is very distracting.
I lke the black background, it brings out the colors in the ball
Thanks, but the Clusty on the front is just a watermark for online purposes only.
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Old 09-01-2007, 02:45 PM
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Hmmm... me thinks you have a bit of fringeing going on on the right hand side of the footy, maybe a touch blown out below the S?... Don't mind the crop myself, i'd like to see more detail in the little bumpy orange bits maybe?...
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