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Old 08-28-2007, 02:51 PM
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Old 08-28-2007, 07:02 PM
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well i think the colour is really good.. but the out of focus petal right in front is really distracting.. maybe you could try reshooting from another angle ...
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I have to agree that the color is great!! But I also have to agree that I find my eyes drawn to the out of focus petal in the foreground. I wonder if a slightly different angle, or a different focal point might help that.
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I'll work on it!

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Old 08-29-2007, 04:01 AM
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Hi scotty9009:
The blue color is great! The tips about focus have already been said. My only suggestion IMHO can be to center the subject because the bottom part of the flower is cut off. Thanks for sharing it!
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