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I am just getting back into photography with a camera i picked up a few days back, and know for sure these could be a lot better and welcome any and all critique
First one think I took this first night I had the camera ![]() Sorry I realized it was meant to be onyl one picture per post so deleted the second picture Last edited by tattoodjay; 08-13-2007 at 02:25 PM. |
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The cloud shape and colours are interesting but I think the other elements in the picture look like clutter - I would be tempted to crop them out, giving a smaller but neater result.
What camera are you using? Wulf ps. welcome to DPS. |
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Thanks for the advise, noted and will take it on board for future shoots and post processing
As for camera, I picked up the fujifilm s6000FD which I am very happy with so far, but still using the auto modes for the most parts, reading up on how to use manual settings more often Cheers |
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Moving further left and back (if possible) would have disengaged the clouds from the roof and tree.
A polarising filter could have helped darken the blue and increased the contrast, too.
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Hi - I think the best advice I could give to someone taking up or returning to photography concerns the motivation in taking the shot. As you're about to press the button (if you have time) ask yourself: "Why am I taking this shot?" If you get a good answer, take the shot. If not, don't. Find a better shot where you get a good answer... oh, and only you can say what 'good' means!
This will increase your 'keeper' percentage dramatically simply because you will have motivation built into the image. Good luck!
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Love finding interesting clouds and trying to shoot them.
I agree about the other parts of the photo. I feel if you are not able to get all the clouds and sky alone it might be a better idea instead of trying to get as little of the surrounding areas might as well let a little more in to the photo and make it a bigger subject. Not sure if that makes sense how I said it but anyways...I like he colors of the sky and clouds. I would clone the tree out at the bottom so you don't lose any of the clouds whispy bottom.
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