Abstract

[dantheman]

I loved the mature way in which I was constructively criticized the last time I posted on this forum, so I have decided to again posted a picture to be CCed.
Edit: EXIF data http://www.flickr.com/photo_exif.gne?id=1098351264
Non edited version http://www.nyplusny.com/dan

[christopher.protagonist]

very nice. no exif data, so I'm assuming this is a long exposure? doesn't really matter, though. Anyhow, this is a fine piece, in my opinion. the crop seems a little tight, however. but if the picture is untouched, maybe you could add more to the canvas on the bottom left side. that would make for nice wallpaper.

[melanie2457]

These are always fun to do.

[Nicole]

Out of curiosity, what did you use for the light?

As far as critique, I think that it's kind of interesting, but the blown out bit in the upper right bothers me because there is so much of it. For next time be careful of holding the light source in one place for too long

[subrataofkris]

30 sec exposure at F/13 makes the pattern sharp. Elimination of the bright light with yellow burned out section, could make it better. Why not have the whole pattern instead of cropping out the top and right to make it more interesting?