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Old 08-08-2007, 09:15 AM
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ok, my first post in this forum! i hope its ok if i post the original and the edited pic, if not i will remove one of them

i took this picture the other evening in my back garden. i loved the colours of the sky.

i felt the colours werent vivid enough and the houses seemed a bit distracting to me so i edited it in photoshop and got this:

im not sure if ive overdone it tho?
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Old 08-08-2007, 09:41 AM
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Welcome to this forum aProperNewbie, you have captured a very beautiful mood in the shot. The silhouetted houses in the corner with a riot of colours in the evening sky looks wonderful. I thought may be a little more of the dark foreground would make it better. Nice work on the cloning of the wire.

We would be happy if you share more of your work.
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Old 08-08-2007, 07:39 PM
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i think if you crop a little of the left and top, it would look better....
the top left looks too empty right now...
but i really like the colours in the sky.. so great shot...
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