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I took this with my point and shoot.

When I edited the photo, I used the one step noise removal.
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Good shot. I find the forground a little distracting.
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Nice shot!

I too find the foreground distracting, maybe you could try a different crop, possibly cutting of 95% of the grass, leaving just a short fringe to add slight depth to the photo.

Another thing that might be worth a try would be cloning out the T light as it looks out of place and is breaking up the tree.

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Old 08-08-2007, 09:01 AM
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WriterBarb,

If you have the option, an earlier or later shot (8 AM, 6 PM) would give you much better shadows and color. This is like Noon, just a harsh time for a photo. If you can move to the right and use open space of landing area as your foreground (shooting over cars, maybe), it would furnish context.
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