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Old 08-04-2007, 04:55 PM
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I took this while waiting for someone.
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Old 08-04-2007, 05:02 PM
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Nice shot.. DOF is a little too shallow seems like the top petals are a little OOF. Also you cut off part of the flower. I think it would be better if you had the entire top petal in the frame and also the tip of the leaf on the bottom.
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Old 08-04-2007, 07:02 PM
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waiting for some one paid u. yellow is a naturally vibrant, full of life and this ha come well in yr yellow shine. i too have one compact kodak and really enjoy photographing with it. congrats.
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Old 08-05-2007, 04:53 AM
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hil85,

Can't remember seeing two sunflower photos the same, or identical blooms. This is a portrait of an individual flower, taken in an interesting way. Well done.

Consider square framing on one, with all of it inside.
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