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Old 08-03-2007, 11:01 PM
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Beautiful photo. Good composition The shadows leads you nicely into the picture and the exposure seems just right.

Only thing i could put mu finger on is the slightly more 'weight' to the right.
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Old 08-03-2007, 11:51 PM
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Only thing i could put mu finger on is the slightly more 'weight' to the right.
I agree with slightly more "weight" on the right. What if you crop up to the first large tree from the right? Nicely done
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I like it too. I think it definitely creates a mood. You did a nice job capturing the late afternoon light. Since you're highlighting the strong, repeated verticals of the trees, you might rotate it a bit to make the thick center tree precisely vertical (unless this ended up making the horizon too lopsided).
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Thomas|K,

Care to describe what mood you were hoping for?
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Old 08-05-2007, 10:03 AM
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Thanks for your suggestions,
Jiminy, I was trying to capture the rays of the aternoon Sun to create a warm peaceful mood.
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