demolition

[NIN]

shot by a nikon D80. i forget all the tecnical stuff, but i did some editing to it

[PLouie]

The imagery on the right is a lot less interesting to me than that of the left. It is also pretty distracting. It is enough for me to say you should crop out the right entirely and perhaps use a square frame starting from the left edge and ending near the right vertibal beam. It has interesting light so I'd like to see what else you can do with that.

For now, the only other thing I have a problem with is the softness. It looks incredibly soft for the subject matter. For this I think the better approach would be to go for sharpness and clarity. Show the textures and the wear and tear of this place.

Try using the Clarity adjustment in the new Adobe Camera Raw 4 update. Another thing you might want to try is using the unsharp mask filter but using a high radius but mid level range Amount. Give it a try. You can come up with really nice images.