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Old 07-22-2007, 09:46 AM
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Wow, I've gone more than 2 weeks with almost zero DPS activity! I'm sure I missed alot. Haven't had much photography time, though I managed to get this. As usual don't hold back.

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Old 07-22-2007, 12:37 PM
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I like the way you have it off centered but think maybe a bit more contrast to bring it out more.
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Old 07-22-2007, 01:47 PM
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The horizon line where the blue meets green is a little distracting. Maybe the background should be all one color.

I like the way you have set the plant up to the Rule of Thirds.
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Old 07-22-2007, 02:35 PM
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Nice shot. The weed is pretty.

I agree the different colors are distracting.
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Old 07-22-2007, 11:08 PM
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ribkaje,

There is almost nothing in the background of interest, but the weed is tiny enough to be shown full size. If you zoom in a crop, with a little room all around it, the weed blooms would look bigger and less cluttered. Weeds are half my photo collection, so I can appreciate this photo even more. Come back more often, if you can.
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Old 07-23-2007, 12:49 AM
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Definitely crop the picture to exhibit the blooms, it is quite a subject, keep up the good work!
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Old 07-23-2007, 07:57 AM
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Thanks for the advice guys! Here's the edit, with a crop like jC and taykuyphotoart suggested. I tried removing the blue wall behind but unfortunately my cloning skills are horrible, especially around the blooms' edges. Will give this one another go soon!

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soooooo much better!
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Old 07-23-2007, 10:06 AM
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ribkaje,

Little gems in many shapes, bigger shows them off, makes them more important. When looking in the viewfinder, if you give yourself a little more room around the blooms, you have the option to place them left, right, up, down. And of course, notice what's behind them. Good eye for interesting subject choice.
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