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07-17-2007, 06:33 AM
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Moda Lambretta
Wow after a year of shooting with a 350D I finally got around to shooting in RAW. Took this shot while on vacation. ISO was all wrong at 1600 - serves me right for not checking. Let me know how this shot could have been better.
Cheers, Karl 
Last edited by didipusrex; 07-17-2007 at 08:35 AM. Reason: broken link 
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07-17-2007, 06:39 AM
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im not sure if it was human error or if my comp isn't loading the pic but i don't see anything.
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07-17-2007, 06:40 AM
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sorry, photobucket picked the wrong time to go on maintenance. i'll delete and repost later.
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07-17-2007, 06:44 AM
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how the heck does one delete a post here? haha moron. anyway, i'll edit the post later to embed the photo. I hope the link works.
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07-17-2007, 07:31 AM
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In my eyes, there should be more colour balance in the composition. If you notice carefully, there is red, green and brown and white in the background. The central character is sitting on a scooter, which has lot of reflecting surfaces. Due to so many variations and deep contrasts, I cannot concentrate on any one aspect. I would try to keep a flat coloured background and frame in more on the human figure. By doing so, I can concentrate on the exposure of her face, hair and the tone of her skin. May be, I can bend a little low and frame her photograph by eliminating the scooter altogether and keeping he between the two mirrors only.
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07-17-2007, 08:43 AM
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Thanks for the comment Subrata. How about this?
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07-17-2007, 08:51 AM
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You are a fast learner, great! This looks much better, a liitle more crop from bottom (just below the headlight) will be better. I will try a little post processing in photoshop and send it back to you when I get some time.
Regards,
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07-17-2007, 09:10 AM
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07-17-2007, 09:24 AM
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The second one is a really nice shot. The first one not so much because your shooting from top , if you had bent down to her eye level (Similar to the second one) and composed the shot the same way it would have looked much better, IMHO
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07-17-2007, 09:32 AM
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that second post is a major improvement from the first. the first was distracting and like already mentioned its due to the busy colors all over.
Nice photos though and congrats and going RAW.
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