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Old 07-16-2007, 11:43 PM
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Hey everyone, I am new to this website and to photography in general really. I took a few portrait shots of one of my friends, I was wondering if you oculd offer a little advice on improving them. All of the shots were taken with a Canon and post processed in Photoshop.

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Old 07-17-2007, 12:10 AM
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All very good pictures but as far as the 2nd one goe's im not to fond of the color selection on the eyes. After looking at the others I see that the color in the first isn't her real color and that her right eye isn't the same color as the left. By making the shot entirely B&W would make it better.
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Old 07-17-2007, 12:27 AM
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The eye color is real... but incredibly variable by light, I was not able to photograph it but sometimes her eyes even turn lavender. The dullness of the eyes in the B&W does need some correction though, Thank You!
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I like this one but maybe the flowers take up too much of her lower face but still I realy like the contrast between the green eyes and the purple flowers.
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