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Old 07-16-2007, 10:08 PM
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Old 07-16-2007, 10:12 PM
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Love the strong colors and expression. Might try a little bit stronger de-noising, not sure what kind of camera you're using or how much post-processing you're doing, but there's a fair bit of graining, especially on the green wall in the far right of the frame. You might want to try experimenting with composition, try moving your subjects around in the frame, experiment with vertical (aka portrait) orientation, stuff like that. It's a fun picture though and like I said, the colors are really great.
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Old 07-17-2007, 04:12 AM
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jalenaaron,

"Erkle's First Obscene Phone Call"

Another Fuji owner! The Exposure Compensation adjustment might keep your highlights from getting too bright.
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Old 07-17-2007, 04:20 AM
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isn't it Urkle?
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google says Erkle so i believe he is right
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google says Erkle so i believe he is right
Well that pretty much ruins my whole childhood . . .
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