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Old 07-15-2007, 02:48 AM
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Old 07-15-2007, 05:25 AM
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Very nice. Things are a little bit centered, but ...........
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Old 07-15-2007, 12:05 PM
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wijew,

Imagining you on the beach waiting for everything to line up before the light goes away. For that difficulty, this is a good result. Purely personal color preference, I would change only that.
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Old 07-15-2007, 06:39 PM
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Nice shot, however my eye goes right to the ship on the horizon against the bright sky. It takes a while to see the people in the shot.
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Old 07-15-2007, 08:32 PM
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I wish this shot was horizontal instead of veritcal, the vertical gives it a unique aspect, but I think that with this shot taken with a longer lens, it could be neat.. Don't get me wrong, I love this shot, especially the colors.

I do agree the ship is a bit to centered, I think that is where horz would have worked better.

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