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Old 07-06-2007, 06:06 AM
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took the pic of this in the manual mode with my sony-dscp200 during sunset.feel free to comment.
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Old 07-06-2007, 11:11 AM
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sarthakadak, Welcome

This composition has interesting placement of elements. The elements, though, are underexposed and need some sharpness to hold that interest. More light (whether larger aperture, longer shutter speed, or more daylight)would give you a much better photo. If you want this particular shot, editting can help.
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Old 07-06-2007, 03:10 PM
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Nice framing on the top, from the reflection of the trees across the water, as well as the use of the grass for a base in the foreground. Perhaps a bit underexposed from the camera reading the bright reflection of light in the center. Having said that, the overall impact is lessened because there is no real subject. You have good technique and an eye for composition but you need to also think about what will keep the viewer's eye within the frame.
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