Sayonara Tokyo band photo

[VernonShaw]

Yeah I know the second one has really deep shadows. Apologies about that, but I only had one light and an open window to work with. The first one was over saturated and the second one was cross processed. This was my first actual "photo shoot". Whadya think?

Happy fourth by the way.

[stevesutt89]

I like the first one, the old car really helps it, but maybe it could have a bit of a tighter crop. The second one has deep shadows as you said, but also the guy on the far right looks....well...out of it, which to me doesn't advertise an exciting band

[xysmas]

The first one is good but can be improved upon. The guy on the right looks like he has no left arm and the crop could be tighter.

A different angle would help the shot too - maybe try shooting from the ground instead of standing to intensifiy the scene a bit as well.