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Old 07-04-2007, 05:09 AM
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Old 07-04-2007, 05:23 AM
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Wow! What a gorgeous scene, and that reflection is captured beautifully!!

The only thing I can think is that I might like to see a little less sky, with the mountains in the more upper third and the tree line up a bit higher then as well. Just a thought to try out and see if that changes the impact. Also, you could play with hue and saturation a bit to up the wow factor even more.

Gorgeous, though. thank you for sharing it!!
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Old 07-04-2007, 05:35 AM
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Wow indeed! Beautiful picture. I'd crop it a little at the bottom to remove the white bit at lower left hand corner (or prob clone it out). Very good picture. Great job!

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Old 07-04-2007, 05:37 AM
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Clean! Bright! Sharp! ... Anyone for a dip?

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Old 07-04-2007, 05:43 AM
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I hope you dont mind, but this is my take on your photo

I cropped a bit of sky out, and water.
fiddles with curves make the sky a bit more blue
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Old 07-04-2007, 06:39 AM
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Flomaster, I just finished a copy of this in CS3 and it an identical version of what you proposed...great minds bla, bla, bla.

Seriously Maxiecat, this is one gorgeous composition! I absolutely love it. You've done a great job here. In formal composition a dead center horizon is suggested as ideal for a shot demonstrating symmetry, and that is what you have here. You do what makes you happy though. Blow this up and put this keeper in a frame.

If you are able to access this area again, try shooting the exact scene at dawn or sunset, depending on the direction this faces. You might just get a once in a lifetime shot begging to be sold.

PS. How can I get to this place?
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Old 07-04-2007, 11:07 AM
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Maxiecat, welcome.

Lovely shot. Absolutely love the reflection in the water.
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Old 07-04-2007, 03:19 PM
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I echo everything that has gone before.

One suggestion -- try running a local contrast enhancement, and you may find that you cut down a bit on the "haze" on the background mountains and gets you deeper colour there.

I think the most popular way of doing LCE is to run the unsharp mask with very high radius settings (like 50 pixels), a small amount (10-20%) and 0 threshold. Here's a tutorial.

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I echo everything that has gone before.

One suggestion -- try running a local contrast enhancement, and you may find that you cut down a bit on the "haze" on the background mountains and gets you deeper colour there.

I think the most popular way of doing LCE is to run the unsharp mask with very high radius settings (like 50 pixels), a small amount (10-20%) and 0 threshold. Here's a tutorial.

EL
EL I just took the photo I fiddled with and did the unsharp mask. and wow the trees popped out with more detail as did the mountains.
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I've cropped it a little, and played with the colours. Do you think its better like this? Comments please.
This is Lake Josephine just a short disance from Many Glacier Lodge on the east side of the park. Thanks for all the positive comments so far.
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