#1 (permalink)  
Old 07-03-2007, 10:11 AM
dPS Forum Member
  
Join Date: Jun 2007
Posts: 63
Default Double Portraits


Please Write Critique and Comments about this shoot ^_^
Reply With Quote
  #2 (permalink)  
Old 07-03-2007, 11:15 AM
daylebo5's Avatar
dPS Forum Member
  
Join Date: Jun 2007
Location: Some planet called Earth...
Posts: 148
Default
the composition is better in this one.. but i think you need to adjust your White balance..
some other pro's can comment more on the WB..
__________________
- Dayle : Nikon D40 w/ 18-55mm kit and a couple of filters...
Flickr [OK to edit and repost on DPS forums]
Reply With Quote
  #3 (permalink)  
Old 07-03-2007, 11:35 AM
Nicole's Avatar
Super Fantastic Moderator
  
Join Date: Dec 2006
Location: Wellington, New Zealand
Posts: 9,225
Default
I totally agree with daylebo5. Your composition is better, but the white balance definitely needs to be fixed. You can fix it in post processing by removing some of the magenta hue and increasing the amount of blue. I just recommended this site to someone else to read, but you might want to look at this article at Cambridge in Colour about Understanding White Balance.
__________________
Nikon D90 | Sony NEX-3
Nikkor 18-55 | Nikkor 70-300 | Nikkor 50 f/1.4D | Lensbaby 2.0 | Nikkor 85 f/1.8D | Nikkor 105 f/2.8 VR | Sigma 10-20 f/4-5.6 | Nikkor 10.5 f/2.8 Fisheye | Sony 16 f/2.8 | Sony 18-55 | 2xSB600 | Orbis Ring Flash Adapter
My Flickr
Reply With Quote
Reply

Bookmarks

« Previous Thread | Next Thread »
Thread Tools
Display Modes
Linear Mode Linear Mode

Posting Rules
You may not post new threads
You may not post replies
You may not post attachments
You may not edit your posts
BB code is On
Smilies are On
[IMG] code is On
HTML code is On
Trackbacks are On
Pingbacks are On
Refbacks are Off


Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.4
Copyright ©2000 - 2012, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.

What’s Your Preference?

Daily Digest

Each day we send out a quick email to thousands of DPS readers to notify them of updates. This email is just short excerpt of the first few lines of our latest post with a link if you want to read it all. You can unsubscribe from this this service at any time.

This service is provided by a third party (Feedburner) and you can subscribe to it by leaving your email address in the following field and confirming your subscription when you get an email asking you to do so.

Enter your email address for
Daily Updates:

Weekly Summary

For those wanting a weekly summary of what happens on this site this free email newsletter is probably your best option. It includes a summary of the tips posted to the site each week. This newsletter is subscribed to by over 25000 readers (many who also subscribe to the other options above) - come join the community!

To subscribe to this weekly newsletter simply add your email address to the following field and then follow the confirmation prompts. You will be able to unsubscribe at any time.

Enter your email address for
Free Weekly Newsletter:

 
SEO by vBSEO 3.3.0