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[Floris]

Hey you all!

I haven't been here for a while..
Biggest reason is probably because I've been out of photography for a while.
But I see DPS has grown! That's really cool.

So here's a picture I've taken recently..
It was in my mind for a very long time..

My allstar shoes (actually fake ones), in a hammock, blue sky with some clouds.. and all that.

But.. I had to wait for the right weather with the right clouds and all that.
Also.. I accidentaly cut a hole in my shoes.. so i had to buy new ones! and I did.
So finally I got to shoot it!!
and here it is..

So now i finally shot it.. I'd like some comments on it.

So.. If you could take 5 minutes of your time for me, and think about ups and downs.. do's and dont's in this photo.. I'd be more then happy!

Thank you!!!

ps: here's the photo

[Joseki]

Hi Floris!
Nice idea!
I was wandering about a series of shots including my/anyone feets and whatever is beneath them... I think some nice pics could come out from this...
And your is a nice one!
You could just enhance a bit the overall colors, cause they're not very brilliant, but maybe it's just the hammock and the jeans color that trick my eyes!
Good composition!

[stevesutt89]

This is porbably not very helpful now, because you've already taken the photo, but if you feel like reshooting, maybe you could try and shoot from a lower angle so that the shoes are closer to the sky and the realationship between them (shoes + sky) is more apparent. I also don't think that the tree in between your feet does anything to enhace this shot, it kind of steals the lime light from your shoes and the sky.
But if you don't want to retake my suggestion is to crop some of the legs out, to make the shoes a bit more prominent

[Floris]

hey thanks, I'll try that once!

easy to reshoot
thnxyou both!