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06-28-2007, 09:04 PM
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Lothegan,
Well, here is the one out of 20 photos (just estimating) you have posted, that has some serious trouble spots. Too much blurry paper in foreground. Ninety-percent out of focus. Background draws attention with brightness. Pen is at an awkward angle (the colored shadow at tip is good). The cup is cut off at top and right side. Not sure it is everyone's habit to listen to music and drink coffee while studying (yes, I do), so the connection between title and photo is a little loose. And it's still a way to see how photos are seen through others' eyes. So keep them coming, you'll only learn faster.
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06-28-2007, 09:34 PM
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Lothegan- I think that this looks a lot like when I'm studying too. I won't bore you by linking to the picture or two I have in my photostream of my coursework. They can be difficult pictures to take actually, trying to balance between what should be in focus and what shouldn't and also getting all the colours right. I think that if you'd changed your angle so you were more above the work and looking down, you could have eliminated the yellow table in the background. Though I do like the low angle, so you could also try putting some school books behind all the work so that also removes the brightness of the table.
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06-28-2007, 09:36 PM
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Lothegan,
You have many good photos, but even the best photographer will sometimes post something that just isn't like the really good ones. This one is not like your portraits, not as strong as a photograph. It's given you experience, and that's good. It can be exciting showing your work to people who are interested. So keep taking photos, and show them when they are ready.
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06-28-2007, 11:32 PM
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photo sandwiches can be kind of difficult to do sometimes. so many different things/subjects.
a little tad to much bokeh though
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