Macro Eyes

[Lothegan]

Please write comments and critique for this shoot...tanks a lot....^_^

[thingy]

Hi,

Okay well first I would say you have lost the focus on the iris and pupil which for me is essential for this type of shot. Maybe you can reclaim it through sharpening? Secondly, as there is only one eye on view, the position across to the right looks a little odd. Again this may just be down to personal preference but I would like to the iris more centered.

G

[Lothegan]

Hi Thingy,
Thanks for your comments...I've lost the focus on the iris i know this, i'm happy that you have express your idea for my shoot the position of the eyes is not centered because the eyes is like a "fear eyes"...
The problem of the focus is essential...you have reason...

[thingy]

Exactly as you mentioned "fear EYES" as in plural. You do get some of the feeling of fear for sure, that was my first interpretation of this shot with the wide openness of the eye. But I personally think this feeling is much better expressed by both eyes.

G

[Lothegan]

I will try to take a similar shoot with both eyes on next day..thanks for your critique and your councils....

[thingy]

Don't get me wrong Lothegan. My comments are only a personal preference, that doesn't mean there is anything wrong with your original composition.

G

[Lothegan]

Don't worry....I want follow your councilus to improve my shoot and composition...i'm only a beginner and all councils and critique are welcome...

[thingy]

We are all beginners mate! Forever!! There is always something to be learned from others. However, sometimes I feel composition can be such a personal thing. I no doubt have images that I love but they do not follow general rules of composition and so may be frowned upon by others. As long as I get some personal enjoyment out of them, they get to stay.

G

[Saralonde]

Originally Posted by thingy

We are all beginners mate! Forever!! There is always something to be learned from others. However, sometimes I feel composition can be such a personal thing. I no doubt have images that I love but they do not follow general rules of composition and so may be frowned upon by others. As long as I get some personal enjoyment out of them, they get to stay.

G

As it should be .