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Holiday snap near Bournemouth UK.
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Old 06-27-2007, 05:02 PM
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Wow! Is that shot for real? did you capture all three in the same shot or is it combined? I would suggest maybe a little sharpening as it appears a touch out of focus.

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Old 06-27-2007, 05:17 PM
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i don't want to be mean or anything but here's what i see wrong with it: colours are washed out, quality isn't that great (not much sharpness of the details - looks like a crop out of a quite larger image), your subject isn't very clear (which one is it and how is it differentiated from the background) and also you have that boring sky. now don't take this as a this sucks comment, but more of a this could be done a bit better. practice, shoot more and i think you'll get it just right..
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Old 06-28-2007, 07:48 AM
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bobhoulston, Welcome

Really, comments can help even if it isn't what you would hope for. There is a lot going on in your photo and it's a less-than-sharp focus. That's something experience will improve. Did you have "holiday snap" equipment for this? Any extra information may help us give you a more detailed critique. Your horizon is straight; that's a big plus!
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