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I think this is great right here.

My only comments really would be to soften the grain a touch more and to crop a little less on the bottom - a frame may kill the shoes on the bottom. Everything else is spot on - the lighting, shadows, lines (especially the line drawing to her umm, skirt) etc.
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Old 06-24-2007, 06:25 PM
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You have a talent for this type of photography and I encourage you to keep going with it. Nice technical qualities. The pose against the door looks quite awkward for her to maintain and detracts from an otherwise excellent shot.
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Old 06-24-2007, 06:27 PM
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love it!... little more room around the feet maybe? ..nah, love it.. s
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Old 06-24-2007, 07:08 PM
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You really do some good work. Congrats on another great shot.
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Jason, Another superb image, can't critique, loving your work. Keep it coming!!

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Old 06-25-2007, 04:37 AM
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I love the color & the tone
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Another super shot! I'm beginning to really, really dig your work!
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Old 06-25-2007, 06:48 AM
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thanks for the comments.

now that i look at it i wish i would of included more bottom area. needs more grain though lol (i love grainy)
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I like this shot a lot. It almost looks as if something is coming towards her from out of the frame, which is where she is focused. I really like the style you have.
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