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I like it, but i think the problem is the crane is being out done by the sky,
i think it would look alot better if you cut down the sky to just around the crane and building, all the 'empty space' is distracting, i also think the crane needs highlighting a bit, to make it stand out a bit more, overall its a great shot, but i might be bias as i love industrial photo's. ike, |
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I love the clouds, so made that the main focus in this pic.
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I think cropping the image tighter on the crane is a good starting point. I would also remove the yellow color cast over the image.
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Alright,
I read what you all had to say and this is what I have done now... Let me know ![]()
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lancer,
The best first move was including all of your subject, and gaining almost another floor, which means your original was better than first post indicated. The color is better, but the whole thing still leans to the left. Notice also how much more detail flomaster has in the crane.
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