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Old 06-10-2007, 02:17 AM
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Im working on my composition, as it is not a strong point, and most of my photos are good only by mistake. But I will also like any other tips you come up with!
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Old 06-10-2007, 03:32 PM
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The composition would suit a stronger web image, with perhaps sunlight striking it, or sparkling with dew, or both. Then the thin green weeds would not be so noticeable. Or wait until the background is not as bright. Or shoot from a different angle, like down toward water. Good shot, many choices.
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Old 06-10-2007, 09:27 PM
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I like your composition here. Good eye for seeing the potential in this subject. The different tones tend to split the image in half but as Jiminy suggested, changing the camera angle may help. I know it is hard to remember but always look beyond/behind your subject at the background before taking the shot. Also, consider making your own 'dew drop' with a spray bottle.
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