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Old 06-06-2007, 03:01 AM
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Old 06-06-2007, 03:51 AM
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Beautiful subject; row of doorways are a little hard to see into clearly; minor. At first look, it appeared you had lined up the verticals of the hanging lamps, but they are off as are the horizontals (starting at end of hallway). Easy fix, minor distraction, but . . .
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Old 06-06-2007, 08:02 AM
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I like the muted tones and graphic lines - well captured
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Old 06-06-2007, 08:19 AM
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I suspect there is a bit of lens distortion going on there. I would probably try to get the verticals on the lights sorted and leave crossbars to keep the sense of perspective.

It might also be good to make the lightest areas a bit whiter although, as purplepixie said, the muted tones are good so you don't necessarily need to stretch it across the whole dynamic range.

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