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Old 06-05-2007, 09:26 PM
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I was on my way home and wanted to make use of this lock at my old school.

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Old 06-05-2007, 10:03 PM
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Excellent compositon and use of the rule of thirds I see nothing wrong with this image I like the old tone to the photo as well.
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Old 06-05-2007, 10:04 PM
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pma, very telling shot. I like how the photo is divided into thirds and how the background is so blurred. Nice subtle color/lighting as well. Looks like the bars could have been a pinch sharper, but otherwise great job!
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Old 06-06-2007, 03:06 AM
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pma,

Good work in all areas. Good choices in post. Only iffy part: if background is an edit, the edges of shiny lock shank have quite a dark band, especially on large version. Only noticeable if one looks for it.
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Old 06-06-2007, 03:35 AM
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Stirs up emotion for me!
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GREAT! I love it...all of it. I think the muted tones are awesome for this shot.
It tells a story......
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I think this is a good photo.
I like the contrast that the photo has. On the one part the subject seems very gritty, but the actual shot is very crisp and clean.

I bet that you could make this black and white, add some noise, and increase the contrast and make this look like a completely different image.
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Thanks for all the feedback everyone.
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