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06-05-2007, 07:24 PM
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Hungry Habits
 Taken during an outing to a park last week with some friends. Very minor color correction, and a slight crop. Comments and Crits are more than welcome. Last edited by Seeker; 06-13-2007 at 09:10 PM. Reason: Updated Photo 
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06-05-2007, 07:33 PM
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Another great shot the only thing I can see wrong is that weird artifact at the top left. I think the shot would be more dynamic if her eyes were open but, you can never control kids. That's why I shoot landscapes they don't move
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06-05-2007, 08:58 PM
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That "artifact" is her mother. Heh.
She is sitting in her lap. The original crop from the camera had a little more over her head and behind it, but the mother/"artifact" :P looks even more prominent, so I cropped it. Would you recomend a tighter crop? You aren't the first person to mention the closed eyes. I didn't like it as well, but this is the best photo I got of her. What can I say... Kids! 
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06-06-2007, 02:41 AM
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Seeker,
In another photo, 3/4 pose or straight on, open eyes can make a portrait more alive and personal. Here, even if they were open, you wouldn't see enough to make much difference. I can imagine a child's involvement with food to cause this kind of enjoyment. Might be the sun in her eyes, too. This is a good one. (If you already did minor color-correcting, you could simply darken Mother "artifact" and still consider it a PhotoShop-free zone. We wouldn't tell.)
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06-06-2007, 09:31 AM
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Nice shot! The child's head makes a nice triangular shape.
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06-13-2007, 09:28 PM
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Seeker, What camera and lens did you shot this with?
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06-14-2007, 02:14 PM
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The camera (and lens) I have is a Fujifilm FinePix S5200. A 'prosumer' camera. Unfortunately I don't have the cash for a full flegded SLR.
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