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This a really beautiful shot, that for my taste, is hurt by the cut off arch.
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Old 06-04-2007, 08:31 PM
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Yeah, I find myself agreeing with Farkled. I really like the colours and textures in this shot, but the arch above the blue doors being cut off is kind of distracting. Also, it would be good to make the pipe straight so it feels more level (the pipe is an arbitrary marker, it's just something you would expect to be straight up and down if that makes sense ). Hope that helps
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I really like the colors and how the eye is drawn to the side to see what is green and then back again. I also concur about the chopped arch, it feels like it should be there.
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