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Old 12-27-2006, 02:41 AM
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This is my first attempt at displaying a photo for critique. It was taken a couple years back with my old Nikon Coolpix 885 (R.I.P.). I have since then upgraded to a Canon Rebel XT with just the 18-55mm kit lens for now.

Sunset Silhouette

It was taken at sunset in the auto mode. It is of 2 fishermen on the Li River in China, on a small bamboo raft.
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Old 12-27-2006, 03:15 AM
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Beautiful image!

Maybe just a tad bit dark.
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Old 12-27-2006, 08:30 AM
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ditto. great capture, but a touch dark. it works well in b&w.
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Old 12-27-2006, 02:23 PM
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I like b&w and I like that shot
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Old 12-27-2006, 02:34 PM
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i really like the image even though it breaks the rule of thirds. just goes to show some rules are meant to be broken
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Old 12-27-2006, 02:52 PM
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Lovely, like the others said before, its a bit too dark
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Old 12-27-2006, 09:58 PM
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Very nice, and not too dark. If you crop some of the bottom off it would look much better IMHO.
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Old 12-29-2006, 04:33 AM
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Thanks for all the comments, I thought about changing how dark it is, but kept it the way it is to keep the contrast between the men and the reflection of the sunset on the water. It originally was in color, this is the B&W conversion.

I think I'll try to adjust the lightness of it and see how it turns out.
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Old 12-29-2006, 04:59 AM
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i think what makes it look so dark is that first layer of background. its pretty much silluetted. i "opened" up the shadows in photoshop, so there is some data there to lighten it up. i would try to just lighten up that first layer of "hills"

nice capture. i think the range of tones looks real nice..

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Old 12-30-2006, 01:45 AM
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I like it just the way it is. It really looks better in the large size on the flickr site. The background layer points to the fishermen which makes the rule of thirds exception work. The forground emphasizes the loneliness of the "trade". I like it.
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