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Old 05-29-2007, 08:18 AM
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so great to meet your guys here.
I am NEW to here and I am new to photography.Please give some comment.
thank you for looking.
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Old 05-29-2007, 08:34 AM
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I'll just comment on the 4th photo. I think it could use some cropping. There's nothing much going on in the upper portion. So I would cut off that upper part. Also, since the bird is looking to the right, we could cut off a bit of the left portion. The resulting photo would put the bird's head on the left.
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Old 05-29-2007, 08:39 AM
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I like the second picture a lot. The green flower on the black background. It's very simple, and elegant looking.

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Old 05-29-2007, 08:39 AM
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I'll just comment on the 4th photo. I think it could use some cropping. There's nothing much going on in the upper portion. So I would cut off that upper part. Also, since the bird is looking to the right, we could cut off a bit of the left portion. The resulting photo would put the bird's head on the left.
Thank you, I think you get to the point.
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Old 05-29-2007, 08:41 AM
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I like the second picture a lot. The green flower on the black background. It's very simple, and elegant looking.

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Old 05-29-2007, 08:43 AM
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I'll just comment on the 4th photo. I think it could use some cropping. There's nothing much going on in the upper portion. So I would cut off that upper part. Also, since the bird is looking to the right, we could cut off a bit of the left portion. The resulting photo would put the bird's head on the left.
Thank you again, I try to crop the bird. and It really stand out a lot.
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Old 05-29-2007, 02:31 PM
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Welcome to the forum. I like your 1st image (pink flower) - the low angle and out of focus background is interesting
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Old 05-29-2007, 04:21 PM
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a bit less headroom on the first shot...and i think it's a bit overexposed...

the second shot looks nice;

i think the 3rd image would have worked if you had something of interest inside the "box", framing it...and of course a bit tighter...

nice crop on the peacock...
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Old 05-29-2007, 09:05 PM
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Hi and welcome to the group. For a newcomer to photography I think you have a good eye for seeing a picture before you record it with your camera. You have presented some nice shots for us to view. Can you tell us a little more about the equipment you are using?
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