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Im no expert at all but i think the photo lacks a focal point. I reckon you should either feature the sun, the boat or the people more prominently. I think you should have moved behind the woman and include the sunset using the rule of thirds. I understand maybe you dont know the woman so you cant get right behind her, but if you were to move back and to the right, you could have got a silhouette of a woman under a silhouette of a tree looking at the sunset. I think if you pointed more towards the sunset, the camera would have adjusted itself and given nice silhouettes of the tree and woman/people. It is still a nice picture though, Interesting. |
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Dito to Azam007uk's comments. Using the 1/3 rule, would place the sun in the middle left 1/9, and the silhouette of the tree limbs in the top right 1/9, with the sand in the lower right, trying to frame the boat in the middle. Just another thought from a newby to creative photography.
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