Girl in the park

[trelaflip]

Captured this last night. Let me know what you think.

[kunaldaswani]

Its a nice picture, i might not know much, IHO i feel, composition wise, you could have given a little more head space. The framing is too close to the top of the head and some how the whole balance of the picture seems little off.

[jiminyClickit]

trelaflip,

If you think of your framing in camera as a home for your favorite person, pet, whatever, try placing them in a comfortable room with space to breathe and move around in a little.

Even though her arm positions are mirrored by reflection in water, the reflection is a strong distraction. Leg position also a bit unfortunate, still an interesting snap.

[trelaflip]

Please keep in mind she didn't actually pose for this. This is her falling off the tree. I shoot at pure randomness.

I was going for interesting

[jiminyClickit]

trelaflip,

With practice, your random shots will get better, and more interesting. Spontaneity doesn't toss out good technique.