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Old 12-24-2006, 04:31 AM
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I'm unsure if I over-did it with the exposure sliders, are the lights too distracting?
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Old 12-24-2006, 06:55 AM
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Nice shot - the only thing is that flouro in the top right almost 'hurts' my eyes it is so bright

Maybe if you could just selectivly dim that bit in photoshop it would be better - but still, nice shot!
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Old 12-24-2006, 03:50 PM
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nice shot, blurred subject and train fits the title well
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i personally think the flourescent light is too bright and takes attention away from the person and the train...composition is good though I think if the subject was more to the left, the impact might have been stronger...
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Old 12-25-2006, 01:16 AM
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Thanx for the feedback guys, I've photoshopped the flourosent light with some burning and made it less harsh, the image should be updated on my original post
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Much nicer - it blends with the image now

Good work
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Old 12-26-2006, 06:26 AM
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definitely better than before! the light, though, is looking a little grey in the middle, and the ceiling panels underneath it have lost some contrast. I'd fill the light completely white and crank the contrast in the area you burned until it matches the surrounding area a little better.

nice work, though. it's a great shot.
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