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Old 05-20-2007, 01:40 PM
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I clicked this in Naldehra ( Near Shimla ), India.
Its a popular golf course near Shimla.

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Old 05-20-2007, 04:06 PM
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That sky is a vivid blue! I would be tempted to think about toning it down a little as it makes the rest of the image look washed out (if that is the right term when everything is obviously so dry!).

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Hi,
Too bad you couldn't combine the great sky from your "Sunrise" image with this one. However, my observation is that there isn't a subject here. My eye wants to be drawn in by the curved path of the fenced road only to be left in the shadows at the end. I don't want to sound harsh but thought you would want an honest opinion rather than no critique at all.
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Is that really a gold course, it looked so much like an army barracks in a desert somewhere lol the sky is an amazing colour!! but yeah need some subject.
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Old 05-20-2007, 08:20 PM
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like the courses in Japan....the fairways are driedd up grass.....
I also think there needs to be a place for your eyes and I just keep seeing that bright blue sky. Maybe another angle with some type of subject or like wulf said balance the sky with the rest of the image a bit.
WOuld ldove to play there though looks like some great elevation changes.
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Thanks you all for your feeedback I think I will try to tone down the sky and post again.

Btw here is some info about Naldehra and golf course. In the picture you see the road I clicked

http://hptdc.nic.in/cir0103.htm
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Hi,
Too bad you couldn't combine the great sky from your "Sunrise" image with this one.
I think it require some good PS skills. I am learning that .
I wanted to stress on curved road. May be it tdidn't turned out to be.
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