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Really, I think that is a great shot. I couldn't make any suggestions at all. You got the lighting really well, she's in good focus, the background is great because it's just plain black and not distracting, all in all, well done. Not helpful though if you're looking for ways to improve
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Looking at your shot I dont think that you have too much to worry about. Good luck and hope to see some of the results soon.
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pixel_this7, Welcome
There's wisdom in those eyes, she is a fine model. An aspect of color that you might try to avoid is with contrast about to be too high, as on forehead where the pink begins to go to orange. In composition, too, subjects too close (top of head) or touching the side of frame, not as good as more space or crop into subject. Minor things, but you'll notice them as you critique others' photos.
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A couple of general tips...
Keep the camera in aperture priority mode and use a wide aperture. This will give a nicely out of focus background. Never use direct flash. Always bounce the flash off the ceiling or wall. But make sure the wall is a neutral colour, or you can get a coloured light over the subject. You can also get someone to hold a reflector and bounce the flash off that. Keep down at her eye level. |
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