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Old 04-26-2007, 12:22 AM
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i have a few shots i would like critiqued....
i love the shot but figure i would leave the improvments up to the people that know....also feel free to critique the others if you click on the pic
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Old 04-26-2007, 12:40 AM
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He's watching you, too! If it needs anything, maybe crop out top and right side, where there are distractions adding nothing to the photos. Great light striking wings, beak and tail raise this above average.
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Old 04-26-2007, 09:02 AM
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Ooooo that must have been a hard shot to catch, I like it, I would crop the right side myself as well, and to keep the aspect ratio slightly of the top too.
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Old 04-26-2007, 09:13 AM
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personally i prefer the dead space to be in front of subjects... it gives them some where to go... and the focus could be improved.. other than that its excellent... i know how hard this is ... Give ya self a pat on the back
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Old 04-27-2007, 12:29 AM
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thanks guys ...i have done no post processing to the photos yet i havent quite learned the photoshop thing..but i love this camera...this thing will get a knat in flight...
i was taking a picture trying to macro a flower and a bee landed as i was shooting and it got his little hairy legs and everything it was great....

thanks for the critiques guys
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