Hockey Sticks

[rookie]

A hockey fan i know had mentioned he liked how personalized hockey sticks are and would love a picture of it some time. So that is what i am trying to accomplish with this picture.

I am looking for any advise to possibly make this better.

Shot with a point and shoot

Thanks for your help,
Mike

[jiminyClickit]

rookie, Welcome

Hockey players especially would appreciate the significance. I like the arrangement, loose spacing and straightforward shot. Good job

[yurik]

I think it is an interesting shot and well compositioned (although you may want to take one step back so you see the top of the stick in the middle).

One (other) suggestion I would make is to play around with an imaging program to adjust the color. Your whites seem to be off and the pictures look a bit hazy and purplish.

I think with a color adjustment, the photo will really pop more.

[rookie]

Thanks alot for the replys
This photo has been cropped alot so i can replace that cut off stick, it is a long stick and seemed to make for alot of empty space on the top.
The color is off, the wall was originally white so i was going for a 'grey brick' look to contrast with the white sticks..... what i got was purply.

I will try to fix it more tonight and re post it,

Thanks again.