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Unfortunately these tanks were loaded onto the back of a truck and no matter how I framed the shot I could not get a shot with out the bars in there. I could crop them out I guess....
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Old 04-06-2007, 08:50 AM
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RexK,

This and the Beads did not benefit from shallow depth of field. It makes background blur and brings attention to a subject, but here you've lost most of your subject and the effectiveness of multiplicity. Losing the bars wouldn't help much.

You have branched out and that's great. Wide variety of objects. I hope you'll continue, and include some complete views of something.
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Old 04-06-2007, 09:42 AM
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You lose the multiplicity of the shot, i mean the pattern looks awesome, especially where the yellow helps pick it up, but you cant really see it, the bars i suppose to distract a little but I think the blur distracts it even more.
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